Stop, please….

“Stop, please stop!! I am begging you, don’t do this” she pleaded, as her breath caught. She walked backwards trying to avoid his reaching hands. She’d managed to put some distance between them when she backed into a table. With a sigh of resignation she gave in to what was coming – a marathon tickling session.


29 thoughts on “Stop, please….

    1. Hey Bhargavi,

      I see my comment finally showed up on your blog. Never mind about the nice note. i will write a better one with the next award šŸ™‚

      As always, it’s good to have you here.

  1. My heartbeat changed reading it… before I reached the end…..
    I’ll be honest, a hundred thoughts ran through my mind on where this is headed. So ya, GREAT TWIST….
    loved it.

    1. Hey Jojo,

      First of all, as your elder, I should ask you “What are you doing here? Did you finish studying? Have you completed revision?” Okay, now that I have that out of the way, Thanks. Coming from you, that’s a huge compliment. Remember, on the first 55 you read, you guessed the ending. So, I am glad I was able to surprise you.

      Now “Young lady, get back to studying.”

      1. Yes, am done studying and revising once. More revisions to follow till monday. šŸ™‚

        I must say this, though me being younger, it might sound a little odd, “You are adorable”.
        Loads of love…

        And the 1st one was only guessable as it was conventional… even there you had full marks for the writing skill. šŸ™‚

    1. Hey Leo,

      Welcome to my space. I am so glad you liked it. Did it bring a smile to your face? If yes, I have achieved my objective šŸ™‚

  2. Verrrrrrrrrrrry nice as usual. Though I love all of your writing, the 55ers are my persoanl favourite. Nobody, and I mean nobody writes them the way you do. šŸ™‚

    1. Hey Sudha,

      Please believe me when I say, I actually think of you every time I “pen” one of these. So, I’m really glad you like them. šŸ™‚

    1. Hello Theconfidentguy,

      First off, I like your blog handle. Secondly, welcome to my space. I am really glad you stopped by.

    1. Hey Uma,

      Welcome to my space. If you read Bhargavi, it means you have great taste, so I’m honored to be one of those you read. Keep visiting.

    1. Thanks Shriram, for visiting the blog and for your kind comment. I haven’t had an opportunity to respond to your email or visit your blog. Will rectify that, soon šŸ™‚

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